Water world

Water world    
Rooms 20/21/19 and 18 are going swimming at Water world.
Room 20 went swimming at 10 past 9 and I was feeling nervous because I am in the big pool. First we went to the middle of the pool and back.
I smelt the chlorine in the pool and I felt nervous because I thought that I was going to drown. I touched the soft bricks in the pool and I hear arms splashing splash,splash,splash into the pools. I see people in the pools and in the lanes.

“So I am going to put you into numbers 1 to 4 you are 1,2,3,4””1’s go to the  other side and back”so we did  “And now 2’s go and 3’s & 4’s.”explained the instructor.

My favourite part was when we did dolphin dive because I am good at dolphin dive.  

I will be working on back stroke when we go next time.

maui and the fish

Māui and his brothers went fishing. They went so far out to sea there was  no sight of land.He saw a big fish he told his brothers to stop.He got out his hook and threw it into the water. He was waiting for 10 minutes he pulled on the rope then the fish pulled on the fishing line Māui pulled and then he pulled up the fishing line and the giant fish become the northland of New Zealand.

            The brothers went to see there earth mother and there waka got stranded on a rock in the sea.There waka became the South island of New Zealand.The 5 brothers became particular mountains.

Mihi

   

Tena koutou katoa

No Heretaunga ahau

Kei Heretaunga toku kainga inaianei

Ko Frimley toku kura

Ko Cawman toku matua

Ko Wendy toku whaea

Ko Troy toku ingoa

No reira,tena koutou,tena koutou tena tatou katoa

Sushi Boulder

        Your story should have a hook in sentence, a beginning middle and end, descriptive words, long and short sentences and capital letters and full stops.

Your story could have paragraphs, speech and speech marks, alliteration, onomatopoeia and similes.

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“OK let's get to work!”

"heeew this sushi boulder is so heavy I do not know how I can push it”.

“After all that pushing I feel hungry. Can I have a nibble?”

”yes.I can see some chopsticks”.

 The soldiers have to get home but they do not know which way to go to get back home.

So they go one way, the wrong way, to get home  and a huge ginger cat comes and they run as fast as they can but they were not fast enough to get away from the cat.

      At last  there was two more passageways to go...so the soldiers go the correct way to get  back but there were 4 doors to go into it so they went into the first door. They saw  a baby so they had a look  around but there was no sign of their home.

     “  Where is our home?”.    

HB fire story

                   Hawke’s Bay Fire

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames horrify residents

Wow look at that fire.                    

Wow that was a waste $333000 on that house because the fire burnt it to the ground. Weil,weil. weil, weil the firefighters went so fast because the fire was spreading to the town ,as the fire spreads to the town the fire was getting put out. The fire took days to put out.

”I do not want to leave my house but I have to” said a sad man.

”No the fire is spreading” yelled the sad man.

 We need to put out this blazing fire now”.

“You’re doing nothing, get to work” yelled.

 Weil,weil,weil

“Go, the fire is spreading”

“ok”

We finally put out the fire. That took 5 days to put out that blazing fire.

Swing Bridge

 WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing

    I wonder if the bridge is going to collapse into the wader.                                                                                                                    

The bridge looks 150 years  old  and I would never go across that bridge not that step.

It is so wobbly ...  gosh  it is lunch time and I have no food hhhhhhhmmmm …….. I wonder if I have got a bow and some arrows.   I’ll go over the bridge to get some food I'm scared because I can see crocodiles in the water.I need to get some I can steal food from here good. Snap  there goes one plank hwwww I got over the bridge. What? It is a wild animal- he was gone… but what happened to the photographer?