WALT - use our senses and the 5 W’s when writing
I wonder if the bridge is going to collapse into the wader.
The bridge looks 150 years old and I would never go across that bridge not that step.
It is so wobbly ... gosh it is lunch time and I have no food hhhhhhhmmmm …….. I wonder if I have got a bow and some arrows. I’ll go over the bridge to get some food I'm scared because I can see crocodiles in the water.I need to get some I can steal food from here good. Snap there goes one plank hwwww I got over the bridge. What? It is a wild animal- he was gone… but what happened to the photographer?
